By Tyoni Jones
One Monday morning I went to school as normal. I met all my friends and sat down in my chair. We were going through our 3rd lesson and the secretary came in and said, “Tyoni Jones, you need to go home immediately.” I went home, walked through the door and shouted, “Hello? Is anybody there?” Nobody answered…
Every time I went home I was able to sense that someone was home, but I couldn’t feel anything. I heard a creak upstairs. Before I could run up there, I spotted a mark on the floor. I didn’t recognise it; I think it was blood but I don’t know.
Tension grew as I could hear footsteps coming down the landing, getting ready to come down the stairs. I decided to go up the stairs the back way. I saw someone being dragged. Apprehensively I walked closer and closer, still wondering who could have ordered the taxi for me…
The body that was being dragged was my mother! I screamed and the person who was dragging my mother turned back towards me and started chasing me. I ran as if my life depended on it! The man caught up to me but I went through Mr Ratchet’s back garden. He wasn’t in so he didn’t mind!
Who was the guy dragging your mum? did he look scary? what did your neighbours garden look like?
I liked your story it was great and a bit scary. Good job
Hi Tyoni,
I really loved reading your story (pretty scary!!!)
What happened to your mummy???
Keep on writing 🙂
Jacqueline!!!
Nice story! Keep up the good work.
🙂
that was a great story and i was really scared
keep up the great work!
Dan
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great story, Mia and Olivia.
hiyah, love your story and its really good and amazing (:
tyoni, hello my name is lewis your scary story was good but what happened to your mum in it.
nice story carry on
your blog was realy good AWSOME made me SCARED when i read it.
hi im flattered about all your comments if you have any question email me at 12jonest@rhyddings.co.uk
it is good story
it was a good story but you need to finish it off overall a good story.
i think it was very scary and did the man have a knife or a gun? or what kind of weapon did he have?
that is a scary story and a good one to.
did he have blood on his hands? what weapon did he have?
Great story Tyoni, perhaps you could reply to some of the questions people have left for you.